Comments for Soaked in Words

Comment on Grey by Soul

Soul — Wed, 22 Feb 2012 23:21:29 +0000

Confused, churning internal conflict, suspended
You need space to get away and a new perspective.

We have to fix a reference point, an anchor, from where you view the universe around you.

I see good tide ahead for you sister :)

Comment on Grey by goingupsidedown

goingupsidedown — Fri, 10 Feb 2012 17:29:42 +0000

I’m big fan of your writings. You actually inspired me to write again.
I’d love some feedback from you :)

Comment on Grey by Doctor Impossible

Doctor Impossible — Thu, 09 Feb 2012 21:37:49 +0000

I love this. Love this to eternity.

Comment on Grey by Nada Faris

Nada Faris — Thu, 09 Feb 2012 20:54:54 +0000

How did her hair smell the day you broke her heart? And how did you smell it? Was it from across the room? Were you standing stiff, ten paces apart? Or were you in each other’s arms, tangled, suffocating, confused?

I like the concept of the poem but I’d like to see more details that would personalize it: what did the devil whisper? What are the lies? How did you beg her?

As for the distribution, it’s magical; so is your choice of words. You are a brilliant writer and I’d love to see more from you.

Comment on Sunrise by Star-Light

Star-Light — Wed, 25 Jan 2012 06:32:22 +0000

If you do share it in your open mic reading, record it. I want to see you performing it.

Comment on Sunrise by My Homepage

My Homepage — Tue, 24 Jan 2012 20:56:41 +0000

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Comment on Sunrise by pamela

pamela — Tue, 24 Jan 2012 17:15:54 +0000

Lyrically poetically perfect. I hope you share this at your open mic reading.

Comment on Turning Point by Fatma

Fatma — Thu, 12 Jan 2012 09:58:28 +0000

Gorgeous <3
I love it.

But I felt that some parts were a little unnecessary. Like the first paragraph.
I like the last part the most, and also, the human anatomy idea..

Over all, Sophia, I congratulate you on a job very well done.

Comment on January by Nizar

Nizar — Wed, 11 Jan 2012 21:24:43 +0000

Lovelly and we can see a very confidant lady behind the letters! I loved it keep walking….

Comment on You, Had You Stayed by pamela

pamela — Fri, 06 Jan 2012 18:22:15 +0000

perfection